Gris and Castle Storme:
Missing space after the comma in "I'm a messenger,my mission..."
"Something wrong?" should be "Is something wrong?"
"The baron and his antecessors" should be "ancestors"
There's also a mistake in the fountain of blood, when you pour water from your canteen but in the text is says you pour some of the blood from your canteen.
Last thing, not really a typo: if you insist on leaving the castle, Eiranda's maid disappears.