David, found several typos during final conversations.
Magister talking:
-Let's abandon pleasantries and *go* to the point. Should be *get*. In same conversation, *ficticious* should be *fictitious*.
-But the point is moot..., response 2 has same misspelling of fictitious.
-So this is the future..., response 3: *slaughther* should be *slaughter*.
-No humans raised you..."I think the Mudd'ari need to forget their legacy and who they once *where*. Should be *were*.
Lady Calenda talking:
I concur...never again speak of our *acient*...should be *ancient*.
Amarisa talking:
-Parting ways with you pains me, but there (insert *are*) some urgent things I need to do.
-It's time to go, will you prefer to stay here, or you want a lift to New Garand?
I recommend rewording it to say "It's time to go. Do you prefer to stay here or do you want a lift to New Garand?"